Crying - tips for writers Ok wcream crying will gather a lot of sympathy. This makes me think of Eomer in Lord of the Rings crying over dead Théoden, and WOW my thought is: "AMAZING ACTING!" That was literal scream crying out of a grown man.
Shilohe ran to them and fell to her knees, grasping them for any ingery. Only once she was satisfied with her panicked inspection did she fall back, and only then did anyone see the extent of her shredded leg.